There are times when I find the books that I rate the highest the most difficult to review effectively. Unlike the author whose work I admire the right words simply don’t come! Now is unfortunately one of those occasions. However I must try…
Dead Straight Line is Malcolm Duffy’s latest novel for teens and is both relevant and unsettling but most definitely a must read. At times brutally honest, Duffy’s writing portrays teen alienation, peer group pressure, and risk taking with skill and understanding. 16 year old Rory is bored and his need for excitement pushes him to encourage his friends in an ever increasing range of challenges. Failure to comply could mean becoming ostracised from this group of teen boys. Rory grabs the reader from the first chapter, the dialogue is punchy and direct and you quickly become involved with both the characters and the action. Rory’s latest idea is ‘Dead Straight Line’ a ‘game’ whereby you make your way home directly, no deviations, even if this means trespassing and danger. Unfortunately one night Rory’s need for thrills results in a tragic accident with a life changing impact on one of his friends.
The ensuing blame, punishment and emotional toll causes immense problems for all involved. As an adult reader it is inevitably easier to identify with the parents in this situation rather than the teen protagonist however somehow Rory’s voice touches you even when he is making huge mistakes. His anger, regret and his sense of injustice when everyone turns against him is conveyed with considerable impact. Rory’s parents display the range of emotions one might expect. There is bewilderment, shock and anger but also concern and worry. These varying range of responses illustrate behaviours that teens may witness or find difficult to understand so this novel allows and indeed prompts discussion on this aspect.
When Rory is ‘volunteered’ by his new school teacher to visit a care home he meets an elderly war veteran, bearing the nickname Tanker. Tanker, although initially a little gruff and unwelcoming and with the broadest of Geordie accents, gradually reveals some of his past and in turn draws out from Rory details of his current predicament. In a truly uplifting turn of events Tanker’s influence provides hope and understanding. This unlikely inter-generational friendship teaches Rory to look at life differently, to consider options and outcomes and ultimately to think about the person he wishes to become.
The storyline is fast paced and the overall tone accessible making this the sort of novel that one reads in one sitting. For both teens and adults this is story that packs a punch and would be wonderful for starting discussions about peer group pressure, society’s expectations and the role of school and parents in supporting ‘troubled’ youngsters who feel they are starved of opportunity. Even if young readers do not feel able to talk about the issues raised with an adult Rory’s story will make them think. He is a character who feels so real that you are still pondering on outcomes and how things could have been different long after the final page has been turned. There are no neat solutions given but there is a gradual increase in maturity and acknowledgment of taking responsibility for one’s actions.
Dead Straight Line covers many issues including friendship, trust, mental health, guilt, blame and life choices. I think it may appeal to readers who enjoy books by Anthony McGowan and would highly recommend this YA novel to mature readers of about 13+. It would also be an excellent class read for Years 8 or 9. The book includes representation of disability and Malcolm Duffy carried out research with the Combat Stress and Whizz Kidz charities. He also spent some time with a member of the Spinal Injuries Association.
Dead Straight Line will be published by Zephyr Books on 9th April and I should like to thank both the publishers and Laura Smythe for my proof copy. Highly recommended.















